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Who Needs Love?

April 20, 2010
By Swindlewick SILVER, ..., Washington
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"I do not agree with what you have to say, but I will defend to the death your right to say it." ~Voltaire

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Useless device of those that fear solitude,
I will not succumb to your lusty allure
I prefer my lonely attitude
To the drama and heartache I strive to deter

The boys and girls preceeding me
That took the fiery road of relationship
Now claw at their agonized hearts, never free
(And I want nothing to do with it)

You keep your grip so tight on fools
That cling to hopes if only in vain
Hopes that their love clings to fairytale rules
To face the dead, icy weight of rejection again

You cut our wrists and be still untrue
Pathetic love, I don’t need you

© Susan R., Iselin, NJ

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taytay dhee donn said...
on Jun. 1 2010 at 9:26 am
i totally agree tah whattt ur sayinnqq
FreakShow818 PLATINUM said...
on May. 27 2010 at 12:57 pm
FreakShow818 PLATINUM, Longmont, Colorado
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This is absolutely amazing. I am very very impressed! This is some of the best stuff I've seen on here. Keep it up!
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM said...
on May. 12 2010 at 3:31 pm
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This is very beautifully written. Keep up the good work!
inspir3d GOLD said...
on May. 12 2010 at 11:34 am
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i love the style!! excellent job :) it reads really well.

check out my work? :)

allegroconbrio BRONZE said...
on May. 11 2010 at 6:44 pm
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I love it!  I feel the same way :)
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on May. 11 2010 at 6:13 pm
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yeah youre right -who needs love anyway? I (ove) the way the words rhyme-its like you werent struggling to find rhyming words and this just came to you easily. very nice. very creative. very five starish.
treegirl93 BRONZE said...
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I feel the same way. I feel a little bitterness from this poem like you want to be alone but at the same time you don't. I understand this complex emotion. Amazing.
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on May. 11 2010 at 12:31 pm
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amazing.... absolutely amazing!!! im practically at a loss for words. im turning 14 and i feel the same way.
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on May. 10 2010 at 8:58 pm
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OH MY GOD you put me as one of your favorite people?! *blushes* Aww, thanks! You're one of mine, too!
Live2Write PLATINUM said...
on May. 10 2010 at 8:56 pm
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&quot;Here&#039;s to waking up Thursday, and thinking it&#039;s Friday.&quot;<br /> &quot;It&#039;s Wednesday, dude.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;And we didn&#039;t think it was very cool, so... we tried to kill him.&quot;<br /> &quot;Dude, they&#039;re cops!&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Great minds think alike.&quot;<br /> &quot;And fools seldom differ.&quot;

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Psh, I doubt that. And if I do, not for long. In any case, I give the biggest thumbs up in the history of thumbs ups. :D
Swindlewick SILVER said...
on May. 10 2010 at 8:14 pm
Swindlewick SILVER, ..., Washington
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Thanks J, but you still are far better than me in fictional writing!
Escaped GOLD said...
on May. 10 2010 at 8:12 pm
Escaped GOLD, Litchfield, Illinois
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Exceptional talent, the words adorn the passion you put towards it. Love it.
Live2Write PLATINUM said...
on May. 10 2010 at 8:10 pm
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Sarah! You outshine me! And to think I was the one who showed you this site! *is jealous* WAY TO GO!
AmericanoLounge BRONZE said...
on May. 10 2010 at 7:35 pm
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Whoops, accidentally replied to someone else's comment, but yeah, I like this.
AmericanoLounge BRONZE said...
on May. 10 2010 at 7:33 pm
AmericanoLounge BRONZE, Johnson City, Tennessee
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Being aromantic, I liked this.
tubbz said...
on May. 10 2010 at 1:28 pm
i love this poem i made a mistke with the judgement i give it a 4 star
Babey.. said...
on May. 10 2010 at 1:04 pm
wOW!! AMAZING
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I agree with you. who does need love it only hurts you. But i love your poem its awesome.
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This is really good! Very True.
ThingOne SILVER said...
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Wow, this is AMAZING ;)

I am not worthy.

I am not worthy.