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May 5, 2011
By BriEzell33 SILVER, Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
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When I look at you my heart starts pacing
And when I feel your eyes on me
I feel like my mind is racing
Then I can't find my mind and I don't know where it might be.
And then I look at you and catch your eye
And my cheeks will go ablaze at your gaze
And I know deep down I might die
When I feel you avert your gaze and I'll be in a daze.
Because your eyes are as dark as night
Your smile makes my heart go mushy
And when you laugh I know everything will be all right
Because I know you're not too pushy
If this isn't love then I don't know what it might be
For I know when I feel your eyes on me I know I am free.

© Kayla D., Croydon, IN

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When my teacher said we had to write sonnets this popped into my head.
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