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My Father Goodbyes

December 18, 2011
By miniko PLATINUM, Germantowm, Maryland
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My father in another room
Tells me he would be leaving soon
To move on his own
Live in room that suit his taste
Play around in his own waste
Of women who don’t have my mother face
I cry wait
Tell me is that all you can say?
Are you really moving away?
But he packs his bag
Without looking back he walks
Into the depths of an empty stair case
Of our basement where he would stay
Under our heads as we lay to sleep of the day

© Kristen T., Tulsa, OK

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apple2 said...
on Dec. 23 2011 at 9:30 am
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Don't sad. People who love you will aroud you forever~include your father.Best wish to you.
cookiegirl said...
on Dec. 23 2011 at 9:26 am
I love this poem. I love the way it's written:).
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 23 2011 at 9:26 am
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
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SPEECHLESS!!!!!!