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The clouds are darkened

April 17, 2014
By 12gage PLATINUM, Genesee,
12gage PLATINUM, Genesee,
30 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;GODS OF WAR I CALL YOU, MY SWORD <br /> IS BY MY SIDE. <br /> I SEEK A LIFE OF HONR, FREE FROM <br /> ALL FALSE PRIDE. <br /> I WILL CRACK THE WHIP WITH A BOLD <br /> MIGHTY HAIL. <br /> COVER ME WITH DEATH IF I SHOULD <br /> EVER FAIL. <br /> &quot;GLORY, MAJESTY, UNITY <br /> HAIL, HAIL, HAIL. &quot;


The clouds are darkened, but
I still walk


Rain falls on my face and drowns
My hair


But I still walk on


Hail falls from the heavens
But I walk on


Rain and hail fall together
But I still walk on


Lighting and thunder joins the rain and hail
But I still walk on


Strong winds blows at me
My hair blows all over
But I still walk on


The earth around me cracks all over and around me
But still I walk on


The earth tries to knock me down but
I still stand and walk on…



Until I reach the field
Many of my brothers lay
With the bodies of my enemies



I fall onto my kneels and scream
At the sky



I look up and I see
Another on his kneels as well



He looks up and screams at me
And charges at me with blade in
Hand



I take a spear from one of my fallen
Brethren



And I waited for my enemy
To come into reach



My enemy runs at me
With blade in the air
Ready to strike
My spear blocks his
First attack



Both of us spar for minutes
But it is really hours that pass
As we fight
Each other



Thunder fills the sky, lighting
Fell and hits the ground
But he and I still
Fought on



The wind blow hard against
The trees but we fought
On still



The rains of Hail and rain
Fell from the heavens
To the earth but
We still fought
On




Both of our strength
Does not fails
Us



But one of us will fall
But who will it be
Is the question



My enemies Sword breaks
And my spear is at
His throat


His looks at me and
Closes his eyes
And places his broken
Swords hilt on
His chest



Before his dies



I walk on nothing will
Stop me from
Living.


The author's comments:
going through a hard time on, and i wanted to peice something to together about it. and this is what came out and it, is the closest thing another can feel, what im am feeling.

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on Jul. 7 2014 at 9:38 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

I wish I could write like you! Fantastic job!

Sail_ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 22 2014 at 11:17 am
Sail_ BRONZE, Eugene, Oregon
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This was great! It was so well written and I loved it. In it, though I noticed you said "kneels" instead of "knees"

on Apr. 21 2014 at 11:26 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 437 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart.&quot;

Wow! This is good! Love the spacing and wording! Great work!

on Apr. 20 2014 at 2:38 am
12gage PLATINUM, Genesee,
30 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;GODS OF WAR I CALL YOU, MY SWORD <br /> IS BY MY SIDE. <br /> I SEEK A LIFE OF HONR, FREE FROM <br /> ALL FALSE PRIDE. <br /> I WILL CRACK THE WHIP WITH A BOLD <br /> MIGHTY HAIL. <br /> COVER ME WITH DEATH IF I SHOULD <br /> EVER FAIL. <br /> &quot;GLORY, MAJESTY, UNITY <br /> HAIL, HAIL, HAIL. &quot;

yea, it does seem that way at times ghost. but when you are me, this is nothing new at all.  

on Apr. 20 2014 at 2:35 am
GhostMatrix SILVER, Bradenton, Florida
6 articles 3 photos 82 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live Each Day To The Fullest. -Quote From Somewhere Else-<br /> <br /> I&#039;m Whatever You Want Me To Be - My Quote -

Going threw hard stuff, makes it seem like the world is crashing down on top of you.       You explained how you feel, very well.       I like it.           Keep Writing.