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Melody of the Lost

April 6, 2015
By NightinGem BRONZE, Woodland, California
NightinGem BRONZE, Woodland, California
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The sunset hues are shaded red as breath.

The water roils as the clouds' tears are shed

The sea shines with the lost calls of nigh death

Riding the wind, seagulls follow the led

Hollow eyes, we trudge along the windfloor

Led by melody of the unexplained

Unaware of what lies beyond the shore

Ignorant of the fact we are unchained

Our faithful leader, tour guide to death’s door

Adorned with but a flute and knowledge vast

With a wave and a smile, nothing more

With a shift in notes, erasing our past

Hark, the piper leading children a–three!

Out above the ever-shifting salt sea.


The author's comments:

Written in the 8th grade during a time in which I was not quite certain who or what to follow -- my heart, or the church? I'd read a wonderful retelling of the Pied Piper, and so this just kind of popped out. The stress is probably all off -- I'm not even certain why I'm posting such an ametuerish piece, but I guess a window into the mind of a conflicted child can provide food for some schools of thought. May also be the result of my strange likening of Peter Pan to the Pied Piper, and a recurring nightmare where I was forced to walk on the air above expanses of sea, leaving everyone behind, reduced to a null state...anyhow, you're here to read the sonnet, are you not? Enjoy the terribly-stressed, angsty product, dear reader.


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