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Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 26 comments

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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tigersroxs2 said...
on Dec. 9 2010 at 1:48 pm
I think you don't

on Dec. 9 2010 at 9:58 am
bookworm77 BRONZE, Emporia, Kansas
3 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is short, break the rules, forgive quickly, kiss slowly, love truly, laugh uncontrollably, and never regret anything that made you smile." Mark Twain

i love this! it isn't the typical love poem and the twist was great! keep writing :D

on Dec. 9 2010 at 9:46 am
alexandrax003 BRONZE, Morrisville, New York
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When it can't get any worse, write a song about it."

i love this (:

cutp9396 said...
on Dec. 9 2010 at 7:19 am
Awwwwwe , This Poem Is Soooo Adorable ") <333333

on Dec. 8 2010 at 2:39 pm
NeverSayShhh SILVER, Two Rivers, Wisconsin
9 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;i dont think your beautiful, i think your beyond it\&quot; [lil wayne]

=] ha!(: exactly

on Dec. 8 2010 at 10:36 am
LexieMonster SILVER, Spring, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life is a learning experience. Push yourself and you will grow.&quot; -Rami

This is incredibly amazing. I love it

on Dec. 8 2010 at 12:33 am
the_recreational_spirit GOLD, Halifax, Other
18 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
look at life with every angle <br /> because the angle that you miss could be the one that changes your life

i like this one too good job

on Dec. 5 2010 at 4:58 pm
Gracious PLATINUM, Go Away, Kansas
22 articles 0 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;life sucks and then you die, yeah, i should be so lucky&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -Jacob, Twilight<br /> <br /> I&rsquo;m still that girl who falls when she runs, Getting back up, because falling is fun.

This sounds like my love life, good writing

on Dec. 1 2010 at 6:54 pm
AlexisRivera015, Warren, Michigan
0 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Here is the test to find whether your mission on earth is finished. If you&rsquo;re alive, it isn&rsquo;t.

wow this is so trueeee

love it

:)

read mine


on Nov. 30 2010 at 10:33 pm
Bnubbs PLATINUM, Goshen, Kentucky
21 articles 6 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let it be! All you need is love!

true that sister!! 

on Nov. 30 2010 at 7:10 pm
OriginalCarbonation GOLD, Naperville, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
dream as if you&#039;ll live forever<br /> live as if you&#039;ll die tomorrow

Wow. this is so concise and clear and exaclty what so many people feel. Its like that one really hot, special, funny, guy - who is such a jerk - but you can't stop kinda caring about him somewhere inside. Very very very well done.

on Nov. 29 2010 at 8:52 pm
Tanglebird BRONZE, Asheville, North Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
I think. Therefore I am.

i totally agreee, everything in this poem is so true and put to a great meter.

on Nov. 29 2010 at 6:27 pm
rachelchace DIAMOND, Stratford, Connecticut
65 articles 9 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If everyone were perfect, Individuality would be extinct.&quot; -Rachel Chace (me)

you have amazing eloquent language (: i love how it flows so well, and jerks... i hate them.

on Nov. 28 2010 at 4:04 pm
writingchick GOLD, Huntington, Indiana
11 articles 0 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Faith is taking another step without seeing the entire staircase.&quot;

This is INCREDIBLE! I love it!

on Nov. 26 2010 at 9:43 pm
NightOwl SILVER, Anacortes, Washington
5 articles 3 photos 12 comments
That is so clever! And also so true! very creative. great writing!

on Nov. 26 2010 at 5:25 pm
LeonorEmmalyn, Arroyo Hondo, New Mexico
0 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I hold with those who favor fire.&quot;<br /> &quot;Two roads diverged in a yellow wood, and I-- I took the one less traveled by, and that has made all the difference.&quot;

*REALLY* good!! plz check out some of my poems when they get approved:))

Trulie GOLD said...
on Nov. 26 2010 at 3:06 pm
Trulie GOLD, Beltsville, Maryland
10 articles 10 photos 51 comments
LOVED IT! keep writing.

on Nov. 25 2010 at 4:03 pm
Breeyup12 BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Kill two birds with one stone...&quot;

Good!! :) really true! <3

Meli14 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 24 2010 at 1:51 am
Meli14 BRONZE, Othello, Washington
4 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;god is love, and love is real&quot;

I Am Free Read please!Rate thanks(:

on Nov. 23 2010 at 6:46 pm
kebruiser BRONZE, Festus, Missouri
1 article 0 photos 3 comments
Great poetry and I love the message sent out with this and the description, it's fantastic!