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Jerk MAG
January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.
I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,
you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.
I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill
the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.
© Colton D., Lubbock, TX
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SideraCaeli GOLD said...
on Nov. 18 2010 at 9:52 pm
Really good! Very to the point with a little bit of comedy! Overall, one of the best sonnets I've read so far.
watching_light BRONZE said...
on Nov. 17 2010 at 10:16 pm
I really loved your poem! your rythm was really balanced and enjoyable to read :D
KenzieBettsy BRONZE said...
on Nov. 17 2010 at 6:17 pm
I can totally relate, this poem just put into words exactly what I've been thinking in my head
CanNeverHoldMeBack GOLD said...
on Nov. 17 2010 at 11:20 am
good choices! bittersweet goodness!
silentvocal SILVER said...
on Nov. 16 2010 at 9:32 pm
I always love when i see a poem speak purely from mindflow-it doesn't even matter what its about if it's "real"-i dont mean real as in fiction nonfiction but real like truly from you (the author) :) keep it up dude :P
MisteriousAngel BRONZE said...
on Nov. 14 2010 at 10:18 pm
this is such a good poem. i think everyone can relate to it. i love it. cant wait to read your other ones ;P
singergurl12 GOLD said...
on Nov. 14 2010 at 5:30 pm
LOL SOO TRU i love this
we_are_sunscientists said...
on Nov. 12 2010 at 6:10 pm
People who read twilight? Stop. It's tainting your writing.
BleedingRose PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 12 2010 at 10:14 am
Wow, do you people do that just for fun? I've had fake users comment on my stuff before, and I just laugh at your immaturity. But I'm curious, do you look for a certain poem to comment on, or is your retared little comment thing just on random poems?
And BTW, This is such a great poem i loved it! :)
gozochrissie said...
on Nov. 11 2010 at 9:09 am
wow that was very interesting and yea we all love a precious jerk at one time...lol
James18 said...
on Nov. 11 2010 at 7:52 am
Jerk,this was a very calming and soothing poem. The author showed their true feelings about that person which really touched my heart.
smileyface9 SILVER said...
on Nov. 11 2010 at 1:07 am
I really don't think she was "too harsh" for calling you a judgemental jerk. Honestly, she could of called you much worse. What she wrote is really good. Just because your reading it doesn't mean you have to think 'oh my goodness! oh my god! she's talking about me!? I better stand up for the jerks around here cause they deserve more for being lying, romantic, jerks like myself'. yeah, I don't know if that's you. But seriously. If you didn't like her piece, you didn't have to tell her and you didn't have to turn your comment into a rant of your problems of needing a Phychiatrist. Grow up.
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