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Jerk MAG
January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.
I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,
you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.
I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill
the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.
© Colton D., Lubbock, TX
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xxxxx said...
on Apr. 27 2010 at 7:04 pm
This is so cute, and so funny, yet so true! I absolutely adore this ballad. Keep on writing! (Do you have music to this ballad?)
Love_Hope_Faith BRONZE said...
on Apr. 27 2010 at 3:22 pm
I like it.. =) its funny yet it really is true and gets the point across...
effortlesslove BRONZE said...
on Apr. 27 2010 at 10:17 am
but still jerky..
effortlesslove BRONZE said...
on Apr. 27 2010 at 10:17 am
the way you described him he sounds adorable. :) good job.
addicted2candy BRONZE said...
on Apr. 26 2010 at 6:25 pm
Wonderful! You captured the essence of what it means to can't get enough of that "jerk" we just love so much. Haha love.
--LoveHappens-- said...
on Apr. 26 2010 at 4:20 pm
I really like this it is a realtable topic as well as the flow is nice and smooth if you or anyone could please take a look at my work and leave a comment especially on The Pretty One and if time the others too then I would love that thanks so much and great job!!!
AngelBaby94 GOLD said...
on Apr. 25 2010 at 3:31 pm
This Reminds Me Of My Ex.
CaitlanMcMahon said...
on Apr. 24 2010 at 11:28 am
I can totally relate to this. You explained what I never could. Great job!! :D
AndTheVinesSpin GOLD said...
on Apr. 24 2010 at 10:35 am
She's kind of teasing him, and calling him a jerk for making her love him.
Valery5 said...
on Apr. 23 2010 at 12:15 pm
IDK I just don't get it. Want to explain it to me??????
taylor_rae BRONZE said...
on Apr. 22 2010 at 11:23 pm
this is really good i love it keep writing
BekkahsLoopy GOLD said...
on Apr. 22 2010 at 6:02 pm
you go, girl! XD
manga_maniac SILVER said...
on Apr. 22 2010 at 4:20 pm
Great! really great
AndTheVinesSpin GOLD said...
on Apr. 22 2010 at 4:16 pm
How do you not get it? lol
Valery5 said...
on Apr. 22 2010 at 12:32 pm
It rymhes but I don't get it. You like this guy that is a jerk or what?
mcpanicfanic SILVER said...
on Apr. 22 2010 at 12:55 am
Ill comment on ur work if u comment on mine. lol!!!!!!
mcpanicfanic SILVER said...
on Apr. 22 2010 at 12:55 am
This is very good. Great job!
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i really like it. I love the part where u say
ur stupid jokes
u precious jerk
lol