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January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

© Colton D., Lubbock, TX

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writergirl22 SILVER said...
on Nov. 30 2009 at 5:42 pm
writergirl22 SILVER, In, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Never frown. You never know who's falling in love with your smile." -Anounymous

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awesome! i love it
kaleyj SILVER said...
on Nov. 30 2009 at 5:14 pm
kaleyj SILVER, East Lyme, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;In school, my teacher had us<br /> write down what we wanted to<br /> be when we grew up. I wrote<br /> down &quot;happy&quot;. She told me I<br /> didn&#039;t understand the assignment. <br /> I told her she didn&#039;t understand life.&quot;

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this is the exact way i feel. like, dead exact. the guy can be such a 'jerk' haha, but i just love him.

i especially like the part that goes 'you know i do' that stanza:)
Katie.T. GOLD said...
on Nov. 30 2009 at 5:13 pm
Katie.T. GOLD, Chaptico, Maryland
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&quot;Why go for a 100%, when with a little more, you can have 110%.&quot; -KT

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Awesome job! We all can relate, in some way! Thanks for sharing and I am looking forward to reading more of you wonderful poems.
*(B*i*a*n*A)* said...
on Nov. 30 2009 at 3:19 pm
hey nice one i like it!
whisperingofdawn GOLD said...
on Nov. 30 2009 at 3:17 pm
whisperingofdawn GOLD, Colorado City, Arizona
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this is funnay :]

smooth rythm... good jobb!
miz lashae said...
on Nov. 30 2009 at 1:56 pm
i lyk totaly luv dispoem lyk so murch lolz i felt the same way about my ex
j@zz!3 d@ b@dd3$t said...
on Nov. 30 2009 at 1:02 pm
This poem is so true someone always falls in love with some dumb jerk and i've done it plenty of times but thats how you learn!!!!u have to learn from your mistakes and i have and its made me stronger!!! <3
CraziiBunny said...
on Nov. 30 2009 at 10:50 am
omg don't amke me cry this is all so tryue
Showchoir2012 SILVER said...
on Nov. 30 2009 at 9:29 am
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oh my goodness its so true....
Morgaine572 SILVER said...
on Nov. 30 2009 at 8:50 am
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Thats so true.... I love it.
reesha SILVER said...
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this was an amazing poem! Love it <3
natalie said...
on Nov. 30 2009 at 12:37 am
incredible :)
ajparker BRONZE said...
on Nov. 29 2009 at 4:18 pm
ajparker BRONZE, Robinson, Texas
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I am going to change brown to blond and send it to my friend!
ilovetinkerbell GOLD said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 4:48 pm
ilovetinkerbell GOLD, Raytown, Missouri
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Be yourself!!!

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I love it. great job..
Kwkittycat BRONZE said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 1:36 pm
Kwkittycat BRONZE, Key West, Florida
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love it <3
TheInvisibility BRONZE said...
on Nov. 24 2009 at 11:27 am
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AMAZING poem!!! i LOVE LOVE LOVE it!!!!
writerxchicx SILVER said...
on Nov. 21 2009 at 9:09 am
writerxchicx SILVER, Wyalusing, Pennsylvania
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I loved this when I read it in the mag and planned on looking it up but I guess I didn't have to. :)

AMAZING job on this. I can totally relate and the poem is just amazing. Not a thing I'd change about it. :)
shorty gurl 1234 said...
on Nov. 20 2009 at 11:07 pm
i absolutly love this poem now i would dedicate it to my loved ones
chula123 said...
on Nov. 20 2009 at 11:03 pm
well i rilly think this poem is rilly nice to all those people who think there couples are jerks
KellyR GOLD said...
on Nov. 20 2009 at 2:26 pm
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We don&#039;t read and write poetry because it&#039;s cute. We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion. And medicine, law, business, engineering, these are noble pursuits and necessary to sustain life. But poetry, beauty, romance, love, these are what we stay alive for.

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I loved it!