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Jerk MAG
January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.
I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,
you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.
I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill
the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.
© Colton D., Lubbock, TX
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ettelohcinlove said...
on Nov. 8 2009 at 8:44 pm
AH! So true. <3 it!
ariwrites94 GOLD said...
on Nov. 8 2009 at 8:32 pm
Wonderful job!!!! you are a talented writer and keep up the good work! if u have time please check out my poem called "Sensitive Am I" and rate and leave a comment. Thanks and keep writing!
IsobelFree DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 8 2009 at 6:08 pm
Woah my gosh that wasa amazing. I love how it was in sentences and yet in poem format. Loved it. Keep it up.
WriiteO2iinspiire SILVER said...
on Nov. 8 2009 at 6:04 pm
This was Indeed and excellent Poem, congraats on getting it published.
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wsbsss said...
on Nov. 8 2009 at 1:13 pm
exactly, perfect.
KarianaGold PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 8 2009 at 12:47 pm
Sort of an oxymoron isn't it? oh well. I'm the same way.
GlitterFox said...
on Nov. 8 2009 at 9:11 am
Fantastically snarky. The only awkward line is "am I yet yours?" It clashes with the tone of the poem and tripped me up the first time I read it. Other than that, it's an adorable poem. Keep up the great work.
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 7 2009 at 11:10 am
I love it lol jerks u can't life with em or without em! u should check out some of my stuff:)
Writedancelove&live GOLD said...
on Nov. 7 2009 at 12:18 am
This reminds me of the poem that Cat reads in "10 Things I Hate About you"
YouCanCallMeAlex SILVER said...
on Nov. 6 2009 at 8:13 pm
Daang!! Thats good, I can't wait for more work!!
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kassiebby(: said...
on Nov. 4 2009 at 12:55 pm
this is awsome!
keep up the nice job
keep up the nice job
ExpressThruWriting SILVER said...
on Nov. 3 2009 at 3:08 pm
nice it was good
BellaEzrebetFang SILVER said...
on Nov. 2 2009 at 12:53 pm
Agreed. Especially the line "You precious jerk" oh too relatable. ^^
saby:)**** SILVER said...
on Oct. 23 2009 at 7:10 pm
love your poems
PinkPrincess GOLD said...
on Oct. 17 2009 at 10:18 pm
great poem i love it!
RLJoy said...
on Oct. 17 2009 at 9:15 pm
this is such an amazing poem. congrats on being publish!
Lonleydandy said...
on Oct. 17 2009 at 8:42 pm
Normally I don't comment on things with as many comments as you have [just to spread the love around] but I had to comment on this....It put my life into five stanzas..I love it.
