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The love i feel

October 29, 2010
By JustinBlaesing DIAMOND, Racine, Wisconsin
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"It takes a second to say I love you but a lifetime to show it" " Love is like the air we breath. It may not always be seen, but it is always felt, used, and needed"

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You say you love me
I love you too
You say forever and always
I say forever is too long

You want to be with me
I want to be with you too
You want to date me
I say lets have fun first

I walk away not looking back
You yell “we are over”
I say “we never started”
A tear roll down your cheek

You yell for me to stop and wait
I look and turn
Why don’t you want to stay she asked
I don’t want to be committed I said

I’m a free man
I need to have my space
I may love you
But forever is too long

© Allyson S., Highland Village, TX

The author's comments:
I wrote this poem on October 29, 2010. I wrote this because my friend cheats on every girl he dates. One is never enough. He doesn’t realize he hurts the ones he loves. I hope you enjoy this poem.
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