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August 26, 2009
By Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
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Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
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Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

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I know you don't notice me,
Don't even know that i exsist.
But, in all of my dreams, you're in "Bop" magazines
You're face is so precious and perfect to me
And i don't care about you're flaws, you're my fantasy..
I go crazy thinkin' about
Just wanna (to be continued)

© Garrett M., Port Angeles, WA

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This song i wrote is very special to me :)
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This article has 114 comments.

perfected_11 SILVER said...
on Dec. 31 2009 at 12:49 am
perfected_11 SILVER, Cheverly, Maryland
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&quot;Negative thinking limits gods possibilities for us and for others.&quot;<br /> -Craig L

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this is nice!
Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Dec. 18 2009 at 4:12 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
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thanks :) for the comment
wanghui138138 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 18 2009 at 12:29 pm
wanghui138138 BRONZE, Providence, Rhode Island
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&quot;Don&#039;t fear anything other than giving up.&quot;

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i like it! make it more original tho. good work
dragonfan SILVER said...
on Nov. 17 2009 at 2:22 pm
dragonfan SILVER, Arcidia, Indiana
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yes please,please,please finish it!!! :]
mDawg said...
on Nov. 17 2009 at 12:38 pm
Aww, this was cute. Finish it!
debbieeee BRONZE said...
on Nov. 17 2009 at 10:20 am
debbieeee BRONZE, Port Washington, New York
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i love it :] very creative.
lindsey said...
on Nov. 16 2009 at 1:52 pm
I wrote almost the same poem, and honestly this poem is so true!! Ilove it!
yaelephant5 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 15 2009 at 3:45 pm
yaelephant5 PLATINUM, Potomac, Maryland
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ok, i agree. i didn't even say why i didn't like it so i guess it would be different if i had.
KelsiLynn15 SILVER said...
on Nov. 15 2009 at 11:42 am
KelsiLynn15 SILVER, Dell Rapids, South Dakota
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You have somewhat of a point.. but it just makes more sense to keep your negative comments to yourself.. its not like your giving them any advice.. that would be different
yaelephant5 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 11 2009 at 6:28 pm
yaelephant5 PLATINUM, Potomac, Maryland
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&quot;Writing, I think, is not apart from living. Writing is a kind of double living. The writer experiences everything twice. Once in reality and once in the mirror which waits always before or behind.&quot;

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what's the point of feedback if it's all positive? feel free to critique all of my work. that's why i put it up on this website. so ppl can tell me what's bad about it, not just that it's good.
KelsiLynn15 SILVER said...
on Nov. 11 2009 at 1:44 pm
KelsiLynn15 SILVER, Dell Rapids, South Dakota
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Don't be too honest.. If your going to post a comment on someones work.. be respectful, and don't put down the author
meggers SILVER said...
on Nov. 10 2009 at 10:50 am
meggers SILVER, San Angelo, Texas
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wow i like it you should read the poem i posted called crush its the truth on wat a crush feels like
Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Oct. 26 2009 at 2:51 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
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yeah, i looked at that song, i thought it was great!:) If you wanna see the rest of the song, just click more by this author, and then click on "Precious" :)
amanda727 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 13 2009 at 12:32 pm
amanda727 PLATINUM, Salt Lake City, Utah
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It's pretty good...you should finish it lol you should comment me too! I'm number 6 or something like that...it's called Never Underestimate a Girl :)
yaelephant5 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 11 2009 at 10:19 pm
yaelephant5 PLATINUM, Potomac, Maryland
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i'll be honest... i'm not a huge fan of this. its fine but nothing incredibe.
purplemusician SILVER said...
on Oct. 5 2009 at 5:07 pm
purplemusician SILVER, Columbus, Indiana
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well publish it!!! lol

i really want to read the rest of it!!!
Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Oct. 5 2009 at 2:12 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
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Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

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thanks, i rewrote the rest, but it isn't published yet :)
Z3bRUh said...
on Oct. 4 2009 at 4:53 pm
ugh don't stop here!!! keep going!

u gotta way with wordsss
BeautifulSimplicity BRONZE said...
on Oct. 4 2009 at 4:02 pm
BeautifulSimplicity BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
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DANG, THIS WAS GOOD, HURRY UP AND FINNISH it, homeboy got talent! dang, thats all i have to say
purplemusician SILVER said...
on Oct. 4 2009 at 3:57 pm
purplemusician SILVER, Columbus, Indiana
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you should finish it.

im absolutely starving for more!

you should also check me out to :)