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Crush

August 26, 2009
By Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)


I know you don't notice me,
Don't even know that i exsist.
But, in all of my dreams, you're in "Bop" magazines
You're face is so precious and perfect to me
And i don't care about you're flaws, you're my fantasy..
I go crazy thinkin' about
Just wanna (to be continued)


The author's comments:
This song i wrote is very special to me :)

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yelsse<3 said...
on Oct. 4 2009 at 2:23 pm
Good poem!! How cute((:

~blueroses~ said...
on Oct. 3 2009 at 7:49 pm
~blueroses~, Summerville, South Carolina
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i do get what your saying, i write songs and poetry too, but yours is really really good. :) congrats and good luck

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Oct. 2 2009 at 2:39 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

thanks for the comment

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Oct. 2 2009 at 2:38 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

i didn't really finish the thought, but i thought reders would get my point, but i wrote the whole song in another thing i published called Precious :) thanks for ur comment

on Oct. 2 2009 at 8:27 am
chelseahicks BRONZE, Kenton, Ohio
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just wanna what?

on Oct. 2 2009 at 8:21 am
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
i have two one is &quot;live life as if it were your last day on earth&quot; and two is &quot;never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing&quot;

welcome :)

on Oct. 2 2009 at 12:56 am
David Avalos BRONZE, Santa Ana, California
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good so far =)

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Oct. 1 2009 at 10:04 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

yeah, thanks for the comment

on Oct. 1 2009 at 2:47 pm
kendraelysia SILVER, Turner, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;To risk nothing is to risk everything.&quot;

Awesome sense of rhythm. :) I loved this.

on Oct. 1 2009 at 8:48 am
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
10 articles 3 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have two one is &quot;live life as if it were your last day on earth&quot; and two is &quot;never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing&quot;

i loved it its about a secret crush that your scared to ask out i have been down that road many times

on Sep. 30 2009 at 8:23 pm
Writer4life BRONZE, Acton, Massachusetts
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wow, your a good writer!!! you should enter a contest when your done!!! It'll be great!!! You should be proud!!!:):)

raybeck0809 said...
on Sep. 30 2009 at 7:29 pm
i really like your song that you rote that takes a lot of work to do

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Sep. 30 2009 at 3:49 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

Thanks, i wrote it myself, and other songs too.

on Sep. 30 2009 at 3:30 pm
Writer4life BRONZE, Acton, Massachusetts
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that's good!!!