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Opulence MAG

May 1, 2008
By AquaGem SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
AquaGem SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Nobody will ever win the Battle of the Sexes. There&#039;s just too much fraternizing with the enemy. ~Henry Kissinger<br /> <br /> Life it too short to let you matter.


I’ve been watching him for days now. When he leaves his house to go to school, I’m the one carefully tailing him, switching cars every day to make myself look less suspicious. If he ever sneaks out of his second-story room, I’ll be the one silently watching from a nearby tree. In class when he turns, feeling eyes on the back of his head, I’m the one who sent the hair on the back of his neck up on end. I am the girl whose shadow is always slightly overlapping his.

Being assigned to watch him almost makes me
feel like I’m not a stalker. Though I’m only 17, I’m a full-fledged member of the organization known as O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. I’ve been with them since the ­tender age of five. It’s my home. Being an orphan, my office is also my permanent residence, the couch a fold-out bed. There are many others like me: no family. A lot of us are loners and haven’t chosen this route for ourselves.

I’m a tracker. I have been for years and some might say that I am the best at not being the best. In other words, I’m great at being invisible. Or at not being noticed. It’s not as hard as the others in the organization think. Being young and female is good, since most we track are young. Seeing me around younger people – my age, actually – doesn’t raise alarm bells. It helps that I’m cute. With a small frame, light hazel eyes, and short blond hair that curls under my chin, I don’t appear threatening. Of course, my ­organization-funded training doesn’t back that theory.

Soon I won’t be tracking down others with the power. They are finally going to give me an apprentice. After years of mastering everything I’ve been taught, they see my potential. That’s not to say I know everything. Even with my extended life I won’t be able to learn all the things I want to. If only this annoying boy would show the signs. It’s been almost a week. If he doesn’t show soon, they’ll reassign me. That much longer until I get my apprentice.

So here I am, sipping a latté and waiting for the Target to leave for school. I have been put in all of his classes in case something happens there, though I graduated high school years ago. Private tutors sped things up. With no family or personal ties, I had lots of time to devote to my studies. Martial arts black belts. Twelve languages, not including English. Everything a girl needs for a serious career in the agency. Such positions of power are not handed out easily. You must prove yourself many times over.

The Target and I have never spoken, but I know a lot about him. His file told me some, but after watching him for only a few days, I feel confident in saying that I know things no one else does. Not just the obvious, either. He resents his father and is protective of his mother, which makes me suspect the father is less than faithful. He smiles often but doesn’t make a lot of eye contact. He usually only speaks when spoken to. Although he has many friends, he isn’t close with any of them. The Target is observant, a watcher. This leads me to believe we would get along if he shows any promise.

I look down at my watch, then back at his house a few blocks away. The Target is late, which means I’ll be late too. Today my ride is a shiny black sports car, not out of place in this suburb full of midlife-crisis men. I turn on the engine impatiently. I’m fiddling with the radio when I hear something. I don’t feel any immediate danger, and I know to trust those feelings. But I ­also know that something is off.

Just as I am about to get out of the car and pretend to look in the trunk, the passenger door opens. I look up in surprise as the Target slides into the seat next to me. I grin, quite pleased by this turn of events. This is definitely a good sign. Perhaps intuition is strong in him. That would be good for my apprentice to have, complementary. I could handle having to deal with that.

“Hello, Lenna. Why have you been following me for a week now?” the Target asks lightly, conversationally, his first words ever said in my direction.

Ah, one of my many aliases. The organization set it up so that whenever I’m on a case, I get a new name, past, and present. It’s very powerful. The organization can basically do anything it needs; it has people everywhere imaginable. I’m just one of many, though there aren’t that many at the top, as I am. They don’t trust many to be trackers. Or to be apprentices. All of the full members have the power, though we control others to get things done.

My smile deepens as I say in my authoritative, professional voice, “My real name is Jade. I am a witch of the moon and a tracker for the organization known as O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. You are also a witch. We would like to formally welcome you into the organization as my apprentice. Here is my card for verification.”

Jade Wordsworth
Tracker for O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E
Official Political Understanding Lending ­Everyone ­Navigation for Co-Existing Ethereals
Office hours: 8 a.m.-3 p.m. Mon-Sat
Phone: 555-5555
Proud league of witches of the sun and moon.
Worldwide.

“What do you mean ‘moon and sun’? Or ‘tracker’?” he asks, still looking at my card like it’s going to ­disappear.

“Types of magic. Moon is all about spells, the sun is more potion-based, though each type of witchcraft involves the other somehow. As a tracker, I find people like you and I bring them to O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. Every witch must register, train, and become a member by law. In fact, the organization is like a government targeted toward witches,” I explain with a smile, loving the fact that this time I get to teach the newbie.

“Magic? Seriously?” he asks, eyes wide, meeting mine. They are large, yellow, and catlike.

I click a button on my left, automatically locking the doors. I put the car into drive, pulling out onto the road. As an afterthought I add as a courtesy, “I think you had better come with me.” .



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on Apr. 2 2010 at 6:12 pm
COURTneyyy27 SILVER, Boise, Idaho
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Fabulous! Loooooved it. Keep on writing...you're amazing!!

on Apr. 1 2010 at 5:41 pm
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER, Tequesta, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life. Don&#039;t talk to me about life.&quot;<br /> ~Marvin the Paranoid Android (from the Hitchhiker&#039;s guide to the galaxy series)<br /> Statistical analysis suggests that i am probably in tune with someone<br /> (hahahahaha! I love this cause i&#039;m never ever ever in tune &gt;o

OK, when does the sequal come out? I totally loved that! Great job!

nutmeg212 GOLD said...
on Mar. 31 2010 at 6:41 pm
nutmeg212 GOLD, Coventry, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Don&#039;t worry about it.&quot; -V.Z.

W.O.W. that was sooooo good. i would totally but this book.  I'm curious. Does O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E stand for something??? I would really appreciate it if you read some of my stuff...  Keep writing.. which you have to... Bravo!!!

on Mar. 31 2010 at 5:12 pm
Shambler92 PLATINUM, Buenos Aires, Other
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Wow! you seriously wrote three novels?! I myself am working on the second out four books, trying to write another in spanish as well, along with thousands of poems and essays. I'd really love to read one of 'em novels!! good work man 

on Mar. 29 2010 at 8:57 am
bahbahbahrooooke. SILVER, Lumberton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;An eye for eye only ends up making the whole world blind.&rdquo;

superb!

_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Mar. 28 2010 at 9:10 am
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
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Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.<br /> <br /> <br /> &ndash;Golly (Harriet The Spy)

Nice writing! You gotta get published. P.S I have a few pieces of my own. People, plz read my work!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

on Mar. 25 2010 at 9:57 pm
LightYagami BRONZE, Sedro-Woolley, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Have compassion for all beings, rich and poor alike; each has their suffering. Some suffer too much, others too little.&quot;, Buddha

That was really good! Kind of reminds me of Night World! Can't wait to read more!

on Mar. 25 2010 at 8:40 pm
Mz.Bryennie BRONZE, Cleveland, Ohio
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uqh! you annoy me but ilove you

itotally agree sportyzo77

on Mar. 24 2010 at 11:47 am
TheAmazingJoysie BRONZE, Cork, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&#039;Your going to die anyway so you might as well craft.&#039; The Anticraft

Fabulous. You really should turn it into a book . it will be a sell out

kaybee BRONZE said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 6:59 pm
kaybee BRONZE, Langley, Other
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LOVED IT

and hey...btw guys....

FANTASY IS IN RIGHT NOW WITH TEENS!!!

kather BRONZE said...
on Mar. 21 2010 at 5:30 pm
kather BRONZE, Wilmette, Illinois
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Cool beginning, it's a nice idea, nice writing... Though I did think it could've ended less abruptly- it's a great plot for a book, don't you think? Or a mini-series... Anyways, it was great. Good job!

on Mar. 19 2010 at 5:34 pm
XxCrazyGurlXx SILVER, Whiteville, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Besides my fashion sense? I play a mean harmonica.&quot; -Fang (Maximum Ride)<br /> &quot;I never wanted a part like this in my life.&quot; -Demi Lovato on Camp Rock<br /> &quot;Pink isn&#039;t just a race or color, its an attitude.&quot; -Myself

The writer does say whayt Opulence stands for on the card thing

BriEnne said...
on Mar. 18 2010 at 10:30 am
No The Story Did Not It Was A Good Story U R Thee Only One That Thinks That I Would Like To See U write One

BriEnne said...
on Mar. 18 2010 at 10:28 am
This story is good i wonder what happened to them...

on Mar. 15 2010 at 10:01 pm
love.lauren GOLD, Eagle Lake, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;That&#039;s Sweeto!&quot;-my friend, Shelby

Great story, especially the descriptive beginning. I thought it was too rushed towards the end though. Maybe you should of given a little more foreshadowing towards the beginning, and stretched it a little more towards the end. But otherwise, on the verge of a great story!

Icekin10 GOLD said...
on Mar. 14 2010 at 6:38 pm
Icekin10 GOLD, Highland, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Charity is the pure love of Christ.<br /> <br /> There were two muffins in an oven. One muffin remarked &quot;It&#039;s getting hot in here!&quot; The other muffin exclaimed, &quot;WOAH! A talking muffin!&quot;

I couldn't stop reading it, keep writing!

Awesome44 said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 3:57 pm
Awesome44, Brooklyn, New York
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I like Pie

zobean GOLD said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 3:52 pm
zobean GOLD, Northfield, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;A Good player inspires themselves. A GREAT player inspires others.&quot;

I liked it but it got sort of ruined with the whole magic thing and especially the sun and moon stuff. I also think that you should say what O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. stands for. Otherwise, it is a GREAT idea and would totally read it myself.

ArtNinja123 said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 2:13 pm
I'm going to wait to see how it turns out.

Alanna SILVER said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 1:59 pm
Alanna SILVER, Jeffersonville, Indiana
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I liked it but I think you should drop the sun and the moon part, it makes it seem a little unbelievable where you are trying to really create a real atmosphere.