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Jerk MAG
January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.
I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,
you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.
I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill
the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.
© Colton D., Lubbock, TX
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This article has 1556 comments.
darius34 said...
on May. 13 2009 at 6:11 pm
i do like it becuase it is lovely and it ryhmes.
xodistantdreamerxo BRONZE said...
on May. 12 2009 at 10:31 pm
i really like this poem and its very relatable =)
Electricity PLATINUM said...
on May. 12 2009 at 10:11 pm
I love this poem! It's hilarious!
sramosgh91 BRONZE said...
on May. 12 2009 at 3:25 pm
It is good for a poem, but I think it could have been a lot better, I'm not quite sure where you were going with the whole jerk thing, maybe a bit more elaboration. But overall a cute peom, not something with substance, I think you have a talent but you should look into making poems deeper because I think you could do a great job.
Angelmegan said...
on May. 12 2009 at 12:25 pm
thats really good
i liked it
shows wat love u have for a person :)
keep up the good work
i liked it
shows wat love u have for a person :)
keep up the good work
Pink_Butterfly said...
on May. 9 2009 at 1:08 pm
this is really good, and I can relate.
Jaylahni Pope BRONZE said...
on May. 8 2009 at 10:40 pm
i can't really relate to ur poembut i think it's really gud and that 2 me it seems like u have a natural talent for writing poems. i think u should continue 2 write many many more poems!!!
sammyd210 said...
on May. 8 2009 at 7:39 pm
like the poem keep up the work.....
chrissy123 said...
on May. 4 2009 at 4:08 pm
wow i can really relate to this...one of my sort/of boyfriends was like this...a tortured love. I really feel that you expressed how I feel about him and it's good to know I'm not the only one with a jerk bf.
AllEY_NAt said...
on Apr. 29 2009 at 7:01 pm
this is a good poem i love my JERKY COCKY boyfriend
chelchelbear BRONZE said...
on Apr. 29 2009 at 5:05 pm
i like how you were able to use word that ryme and still have alot of meaning... keep it up love this poem!
lyssabby said...
on Apr. 29 2009 at 2:08 am
i lovee this poem;; its such a great poem . :)
propss to this authorr .
great poem :)
propss to this authorr .
great poem :)
Meeka said...
on Apr. 28 2009 at 10:30 pm
Exactly how I feel; I love it :D
gbautista95 said...
on Apr. 26 2009 at 12:28 am
this poem deff. rocks i lubb it and i tink da same 2
hope.floats BRONZE said...
on Apr. 25 2009 at 3:53 am
I dated the jerk - trust me - he's not worth it. There is someone out there that will love everything about you too.
vamppoet16 SILVER said...
on Apr. 23 2009 at 12:55 am
You are amazing with words. I know exactly how that feels and i could never have come close. I give it a 10...
