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Jerk MAG
January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.
I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,
you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.
I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill
the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.
© Colton D., Lubbock, TX
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omg , I love this poem , will you also check out mine ?
TeenInk.com/raw/Poetry/article/93928/Hush--its-mine/
TeenInk.com/raw/Poetry/article/93928/Hush--its-mine/
SimplicityDefined GOLD said...
on Apr. 3 2009 at 11:13 pm
Oh I love this...applies to me actually :)
EMILEEEEEE said...
on Apr. 3 2009 at 5:17 pm
omg i love this ,
u should write like wayy more poemzz. :) there soo amazing ..
u should write like wayy more poemzz. :) there soo amazing ..
aaron daniels BRONZE said...
on Mar. 31 2009 at 7:28 pm
good job
raeann<3 said...
on Mar. 31 2009 at 6:06 pm
i absolutely love this its funny, meaningfull and cute!
XX-LYSSALU-XX BRONZE said...
on Mar. 30 2009 at 9:34 pm
Thats pretty good. Like the ryhmes =] brava
I have a boy that everyone else seems not to like but i see him differently. He can be a jerk sometimes but i learn to live with him. I found a nice jerk, too. Keep up the good writing and hope you go far. This poem is right from the heart and deserves a 5 star rating.
Miss_Independent GOLD said...
on Mar. 26 2009 at 10:06 pm
I LOVE THIS POEM! It's so original yet so familiar. It is a true 5 star poem.
stacycakes BRONZE said...
on Mar. 26 2009 at 3:53 am
i love this. i read it in the magazine. its what made me decideto actually submit my work. THANK YOU
I know exactly how you feel. Me and my friend Teezy are both having problems with guys write now that we have become infatuated with but that make us wonder how come we fell for them. I'm glad it's not just us. This is deep and you should keep on writing!!!!!!
xXTearxStainedXx BRONZE said...
on Mar. 25 2009 at 5:19 pm
i related well to it, but seems a little sing songish. still good though! ^_^
.Misted.Ma SILVER said...
on Mar. 25 2009 at 5:02 pm
great! gave me chills each time i read it, and i read it over and over. its very insightful to those who have not yet felt this part of love.
very great!!! <3
very great!!! <3
mamacassx33 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 24 2009 at 3:03 pm
wow.....thats amazing...like no lie....gave me chills
SaltwaterRoom PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 22 2009 at 4:43 am
i like it (:
Jacqueline SILVER said...
on Mar. 21 2009 at 6:56 pm
little cliche... doesn't stay on topic
ImDumbStruck DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 21 2009 at 6:12 pm
this is a great poem. I know a couple guys like that...
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